Obsessed Over Obsessions

[Child_of_faith]

Hello! I'm sorry it's been such a long time, I've been so busy I forgot about TalkJesus. Well, here's a song that I wrote that I wanted to share with y'all. I wrote it about a friend of mine and thoughts I often have. Sometimes we work so hard on letting everything in, that we push God out. Please give me your honest thoughts!

Obsessed with her obsessions/ obsessed with her passions, possessions, and transgressions/ convinced she makes no confessions/ without a lie to hold on to, she’s nothing more than an apparition/ I’d hate to be in her position

Chorus: Lord she needs your truth/ she’s let go of her magnifying glass as a sleuth and picked up her Vogue magazine/ telling her what to do and who to be from everything from A to Z/ what she needs is direction/ to save her from her obsession over obsessions

Posters of her heroes fill the empty wall inside of her/ she worships them and they don’t seem to consider/ that a lonesome girl with cakes of makeup and glitter/ needs someone or something to keep her mind off the bitter/ it never reaches deep enough/ all the world with all its stuff, can never close the void/ the reality of which she is always fighting to avoid

 

[Dreamer]

that is very meaningful and truthful, Child of faith

 

[stephen]

Hello Child of Faith.

That was a natty ryhme you wrote there. You may have the gift, keep writing and you will see.

I liked your poem about possessions. True of the world without Jesus.

Jesus said "what shall it profit if a man gains the whole world and loses his own soul, or what shall a man give in exchange for his soul"

Powerful words.

God Bless You

 

[Child_of_faith]

Thank you both so much!!! Thank you for what you said, Stephen and Dreamer. It really meant a lot to me that you read this and posted your replies. I'm very glad the message wasn't lost on you guys. Thanks once again for giving me your opinions. May the Lord bless you and keep you!!

Sissy J.

 

[stephen]

Thank you both so much!!! Thank you for what you said, Stephen and Dreamer. It really meant a lot to me that you read this and posted your replies. I'm very glad the message wasn't lost on you guys. Thanks once again for giving me your opinions. May the Lord bless you and keep you!!
Sissy J.

Hello Child of Faith

Good to see you coming back to us. You said in your O.P. that you had forgotton about tj. Visit often..........then you wont forget........we want to bless you.........in Jesus

 

[jennie549]

That was a really good poem. I could almost identify what kind of tune it would go to. It sounds really good