oneiroer's christian poetry

[oneiroer]

I'm a beginner but want to be a writer someday so bear with me. This is something I wrote today. Sorry if this isn't poetry. Any tips would be appreciated!

I'm not from this world.
Though the dragon lies,
and continues to conform me to this world,
I feel I don't belong here.
I forgot who I am.
Jesus reaches out
and takes my hand,
wakes me up from my sinful slumber and reminds me who I used to be.
Jesus begins to discipline me.
I have the power to choose.
No longer do I choose to be chained, living life the same ever again.
Satan wants me to choose him.
But I know in my heart that Jesus is the King of all Kings.

 

[Giggles4God]

Here is a tip: there is more than one form of poetry.

You will find that I have posted some of my poems on here, too.

This is definitely a good poem!

 

[oneiroer]

Thanks! I'll check em out sometime.

 

[oneiroer]

Here's another one I wrote recently.

I Trust You

Trust starts now
Your name strengthens me
Your power, mighty
Your love
Surrounds me with grace and mercy
Hope, alive
In Your name
Satan flees

 

[Giggles4God]

Another good one. Just a suggestion, to post each poem separately so that it is easier to read them and for people to comment.